My personal evaluation of the Log-line ideas we came up with
Idea 1The first idea we created is short and concise. However I feel as if it doesn't involve or tell much of the story-line as a whole and sounds more like a 25 word pitch rather than a log-line. Although it does create excitement as it create 2 different kinds of characters which a unlikely to fall in love making the audience want to find out why they do infact fall in love if they are so different. However this idea was not my favorite and it is most probably because it was our first idea also.
Idea 2
The second idea we came up with was a step forward in terms of its excitement and power compared to our first idea. It introduces the films title within it so people can associate with it. The story is more or less told concisely and specifically. The reinforcement of falling in love for me creates a sense of excitement and character journeys.
Idea 3
The third idea we came up with was another quiet short and concise idea. It introduces the characters in more depth however doesn't do this in a wordy or boring way. The characters are pictured as different and interesting. The ending of the piece I find effective however a little too cliche. However it leaves the audience to want to find out who this person is in which he falls in love with and why she is so 'unexpected'.
Idea 4
Finally we have idea 4. This too me is very powerful as it targets the target audience of a romantic drama by the straight away point of what genre the film is of. The sentence also directs the film's title again letting the audience have an insight into the films story-line. The log-line in my opinion also tells the story concisely and creates an enjoyable feel to the film with the introduction to a "dramatic romance".
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