Chosen Log-line
As a group for our log-line we have decided to go with idea 4. Although this piece was the longest sentence we found it the most effective.We also questioned our peers for their thought and emotions on each idea and to vote for their favourite log line. In all we only asked around 15 but mostly the thoughts were that 1 and 3 weren't exciting enough however the favourites were idea 2 and 4.
More than half agreed on idea 4 being their favourite and as a group we voted this as our favourite as well. This is therefore the last blog of my film's treatment with the decided log-line printed below.
"Stockholm Syndrome is a character-driven romantic drama about a most wanted criminal who captures a young innocent girl, as well as capturing her life he captures her heart. As they begin a dramatic romance together."
Voki is a good idea for presenting your logline, but it sounds like she's saying "Sockholm", you might want to change this.
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